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                                                                      Chomp. Crunch.

The body starves
                           The soul craves peace, love, and life
                                                                                    Red circles on skin.

                                                                      Chomp. Hiss.

Skin so delicate
                         Teeth such vicious animals
                                                                   Black and blue must hide.

                                                                      Chomp. Scream.

Words bring death to all
                                      Unspoken yet are spoken
                                                                              Keep decorating.

                                                                       Chomp. Sigh.

Lying on the floor
                           Limbs pleading for the world's help
                                                                                  Silence is golden.
:iconlemonloving-goodgirl:
For the most part, it's a haiku.
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:icontamiiland:
I-I'm confused ;A;
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:icontamiiland:
Umm... I don't get what the text is about. Hunger? At a moment I though it was someone starving, chewing their own flesh to soothe their aching stomach, but then... I got confused at the end.
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:iconlemonloving-goodgirl:
Well, there is some hunger involved with it, but the main message in there is biting oneself to induce self harm. And just keeping quiet about how badly it's progressed and blah blah blah, you get the point.
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:icontamiiland:
Aw, yes. Now I do. ouo;; It's kinda emo... Don't you think?
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:iconbluemoon-firefly:
Mood: Neutral ~bluemoon-firefly Jan 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
interesting... I like it! =)
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:iconlemonloving-goodgirl:
Thanks! And thanks for faving it! :hug:
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:iconcecilyac:
I've never see anything like this before
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:iconlemonloving-goodgirl:
Style wise or content wise? Cuz it's basically a haiku-esque sorta thing.
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